You are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter:
introduce yourself
explain what sort of job you would like
say what experience and skills you have
Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir/Madam
You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inform you about my profile to find a suitable full-time job that matches with my qualifications.
I am Sofia and I have completed my B.tech in computer science engineering from St. Xavier University, Toronto. I ahve good command over the computer languages such as C++, JAVA and also know to work with SQL database.
I am highly passionate in working with programming languages especially the coding and debugging part of the program. So I will highly pleased to work as Junior programmer so that I can fully utilize my academic skills.Despite being a technical graduate, I like to enhance my managerial and interpersonal skills. Hence, I whole-heartily wish to work with an organisation that can provide good career growth prospective. However, i do not have any inhibition towards learning new things and so I will be most pleased to take up any job position that suits my academics.
Perhaps you may be pleased to know that I have six month work experience as a part-time employee with one of the software companies in Toronto and I can produce reference letter from my previous employer. Additionally, I have strong expertise in Java programming and I have played a crucial role in coding part of my main project.
I have attached my curriculum vitae and other necessary documents for your reference.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Sofia Alex
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ng from St. Xavier University, Toronto. I ahve good command over the computer lan...
^
Line 7, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...over the computer languages such as C++, JAVA and also know to work with SQL data...
^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...so know to work with SQL database. I am highly passionate in working with pr...
^
Line 11, column 136, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'please'
Suggestion: please
...g part of the program. So I will highly pleased to work as Junior programmer so that I ...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 220, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Despite
... I can fully utilize my academic skills.Despite being a technical graduate, I like to e...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 430, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ood career growth prospective. However, i do not have any inhibition towards lear...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, look, may, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10548523207 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08239905383 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599156118143 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 290.88556701 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4595794564 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.833333333 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128719477113 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523884820413 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625147290169 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776460265315 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582132971935 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 41.2886597938 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.