Dear Sir,
I am writing in related to the advertisement which was published at your site. I am really eager to work at your club as I am extremely interested in football and everything which is related to that.
Actually, I am Ms Bagheri, I am graduated from Tehran university in physical education in 2016 and I have been working in numerous clubs since 3 years ago as a coach. In addition, I have a certificate in referee as well that I hope come useful.
To tell the truth, I am involved in doing something right now but I will be ready to start my work in 2 days from now.
I would be thankful if you could give your considerable attention to my apply.
Yours sincerely,
F. BAGHERI
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing in related to the advertise...
^^^^^
Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y. Yours sincerely, F. BAGHERI
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, really, so, well, in addition, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 582.0 937.175257732 62% => OK
No of words: 129.0 206.0 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51162790698 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37013600491 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78694838582 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 127.690721649 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 181.8 290.88556701 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6393652052 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1428571429 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 4.34317383033 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1275118285 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600008834804 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515008918377 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748169861113 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565860908833 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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