Dated: 29 July 2017
Subject: Dissatisfaction with meal
Dear Mr Smith,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the food of this restaurant. In fact, my coworkers and I always have our meal here and we were pleased with the foods and waiters as well. We have been always treated in a best way.
Unfortunately, on 28 July, I had a crucial appointment on my office and I did not want to take a risk and try a new one. So, I decided to have a lunch in this well known restaurant. Actually, I was expecting for the best as always but I got really shocked when the food was tasted. To tell the truth, it was so salty and the steak, in spite of our order, which was totally baked, was raw. In addition,the behaviour of the staffs was extremely catastrophic and put me on a shame.
I am going to ask you for paying more attention to customers demands if you want to preserve them with the most satisfaction. Also, hiring more educated staffs must be considered.
I would be thankful if you could give your immediate attention to this matter. I look forward hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
FATEMEH BAGHERI.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 203, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'have' and 'been'.
Suggestion: have always been
... with the foods and waiters as well. We have been always treated in a best way. Unfortunately...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 231, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...as well. We have been always treated in a best way. Unfortunately, on 28 July,...
^
Line 9, column 139, Rule ID: HAVE_A_BREAKFAST[1]
Message: When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: 'have lunch'.
Suggestion: have lunch
...isk and try a new one. So, I decided to have a lunch in this well known restaurant. Actually...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 401, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... was totally baked, was raw. In addition,the behaviour of the staffs was extremely c...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, look, really, so, well, as to, in addition, in fact, in spite of, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59223300971 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79945189416 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626213592233 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6571946502 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7692307692 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 4.34317383033 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247043151263 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071119464909 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527022858937 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128369693905 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242437585589 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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