You are organising a trip to the Snowy Mountains in New South Wales for a group of students from Perth in Western Australia.
Write to the manager of Student Hostel Services. In your letter, explain:
when you want to visit the Snowy Mountains
how long you will stay
how many students are in your party and what accommodation you will require
Dear Manager of Student Hostel Services,
I am writing to seek accommodation in the Snowy Mountains for a group of students from Perth.
We expect to be in the Snowy Mountains between June 1 and June 12. There are fourteen people in our group, five men, seven women and a married couple. The five men will accept dormitory accommodation, and the women are happy to share rooms, but the married couple would like a double room.
We hope to keep our expenses as low as possible. <div><span style="font-size: 1.125rem; letter-spacing: 0px; font-family: "Akkurat Std", -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Segoe UI", Roboto, Oxygen, Ubuntu, Cantarell, "Helvetica Neue", sans-serif;">Please tell me about recreational services in the area. The group will bring their own boots for </span>bushwalking<span style="font-size: 1.125rem; letter-spacing: 0px; font-family: "Akkurat Std", -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Segoe UI", Roboto, Oxygen, Ubuntu, Cantarell, "Helvetica Neue", sans-serif;">, but we are hoping to hire equipment for other sports, like skiing. Some of our group will want to hire geological picks and other equipment, if possible. We also need to know about access to caves and other interesting geological features in the area.</span><br></div><div>I am looking forward to receiving information about the Student Hostel Services and other facilities.
Yours sincerely
Amanda Chan</div>
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 937.175257732 138% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.38613861386 4.54256449028 141% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.62202619682 2.54303337028 182% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60396039604 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.4091552 44.8134815571 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 129.0 76.5299724578 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11644065294 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631541071787 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100367347558 0.0603063233224 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150847984045 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106568232824 0.0580467560999 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 8.37731958763 224% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 70.7449484536 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 7.45979381443 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.78 8.71597938144 227% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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