You are recently attend a meeting at hotel. When you returned home you found you had left some important paper's at hotel.

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You are recently attend a meeting at hotel. When you returned home you found you had left some important paper's at hotel.

Dear sir or madam ,
I am hemali ka.patel writing this letter to tell you about my briefcase and paper's inside the baggage which I left in your hotel room.

Yesterday I and my business partner came to attend a meeting at your hotel. The meeting was arranged in the conference hall of your hotel. after finishing meeting I and my partner go in our person room. I think my briefcase is in that room I forgot it on the table.

In the briefcase some important paper's of my business deals and other confidential paper of my company.

So,please check the hotel room and ask the service staff for the briefcase and please give me an information about my document as soon as possible because I have another meeting after five days.

Thank you in advance and if you find my briefcase please contact me on this no 1234567890 and tell me if any paper work or other formalities which is fulfil from my side.
you faithfully,
hemali

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir or madam , I am hemali ka.patel wri...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Dear sir or madam , I am hemali ka.patel writing this lett...
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Line 2, column 136, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...aggage which I left in your hotel room. Yesterday I and my business partner came...
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Line 4, column 140, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: After
...d in the conference hall of your hotel. after finishing meeting I and my partner go i...
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Line 4, column 211, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...y partner go in our person room. I think my briefcase is in that room I forgot it...
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... in that room I forgot it on the table. In the briefcase some important papers o...
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...confidential paper of my company. So,please check the hotel room and ask the servic...
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Suggestion: fulfilled
...aper work or other formalities which is fulfil from my side. you faithfully, ...
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...alities which is fulfil from my side. you faithfully, hemali
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...ies which is fulfil from my side. you faithfully, hemali
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...il from my side. you faithfully, hemali
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... side. you faithfully, hemali
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62275449102 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49929128276 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580838323353 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.770452519 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7777777778 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245861727301 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115087326434 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075522115027 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103814126112 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642251946641 0.0580467560999 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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