you are renting an apartment and the neighbors are disturbing you. write a letter to your landlord explaining what the problem is, what do you do to solve the problem and what action you want the owner to take.

Essay topics:

you are renting an apartment and the neighbors are disturbing you. write a letter to your landlord explaining what the problem is, what do you do to solve the problem and what action you want the owner to take.

Dear Sir,
Hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I am writing to inform you about the consistent disturbance caused by neighbors next to our house which has made my life miserable. Let me explain the situation in detail.

To elucidate as you are aware that the house next to us is a paying guest therefore many bachelors live in it who are mostly student studying in nearby universities. The problem is that these students organize late night parties and play loud music which causes disturbance to us while we are sleeping. Although I have requested them personally to not do such activities in the residential area however they have never listen and keep on repeating these activities. Hence I will now speak to the owner of the paying guest and inform him of student’s activities lately and how it is affecting our day to day life.

Lastly, I would request to speak to the residential welfare association and raise this issue and provide a resolution so that we can live a peaceful life.
I look forward to your cooperation.
Yours Sincerely
Saud

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Hope this letter finds you in the pink o...
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Line 4, column 420, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'listened'.
Suggestion: listened
...esidential area however they have never listen and keep on repeating these activities....
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Line 4, column 467, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...and keep on repeating these activities. Hence I will now speak to the owner of the pa...
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Line 4, column 619, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ow it is affecting our day to day life. Lastly, I would request to speak to the ...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to your cooperation. Yours Sincerely Saud
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, lastly, look, so, therefore, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79144385027 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76225855955 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657754010695 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2970161944 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168230562013 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608325191307 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509838251254 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867366435286 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083280540206 0.0580467560999 143% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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