Dear Sir/Madam,
I am an intelligent Medical student who just finished his internship. Currently the financial position of my family is not so sound nonetheless, it is my dream to pursue the Master's course of "Hospital Management" from your prestigious institution. Hence, I am writing this letter to seek your kind help in redressing this difficulty.
Allow me to elaborate this complex situation for you, my father is a honourable retired Army officer and my mother is a housewife. Although, my father is receiving pension but it is quite less and certainly not at all sufficient to bear the expense of my education along with other household requirements. In addition, I have two younger sisters as well who are studying in class 8th and 10th respectively. Therefore, it is inevitable for me to pay such huge amount to pursue my education which is indeed crucial for the growth of my career.
Thus, I would like to know if there is any province of scholarship because being a bright and industrious student, it is feasible for me to qualify any exam to achieve it. Also, it would be fine with me to do a part-time job at the college campus to pay my fees.
I would be grateful to you if you can assist me.
Yours sincerely,
John
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...complex situation for you, my father is a honourable retired Army officer and my ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80184331797 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04007788064 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649769585253 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4863945342 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7272727273 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160682576211 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059206594122 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271358534732 0.0603063233224 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960427337831 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215173935841 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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