You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick Write to another classmate and invite him her to the p

Essay topics:

You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend

who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him / her to the party. In your letter:

explain the reason for the party

give the date and time of the party

suggest what the classmate could bring to the party

Begin your letter as follows: Dear ________

You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Dear Mohit,

I am writing this letter to invite you to the party. As we are new here, One of our close friends is missing his family from back home.

Let me explain the situation. Being away from home, Rahul is missing his mom and dad, and he is so depressed. So, we decided to through a party for him

in the restaurant which is round the corner of the institution. Actually, we are planning for this eve on next Sunday at taj restaurant at 6.00 pm. while having a

surprise party, you should be reached over there at least 30 minutes earlier. So that, we can do some arrangements over there. Moreover, there is a dress code there, so try to come in black paint and a white shirt. Though we are fewer people there, we arranged a DJ for entertainment.

Would you please bring some stuff for the party? Such as some colourful balloons, some face masks and a cake. If you want to give any gift to him, it is all up to you,

Do not forget as I above mentioned stuff, because it is necessary for the party.

I am looking forward to your response,

Your friend,

Hitesh

Votes
Average: 8.4 (14 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...we decided to through a party for him in the restaurant which is round the corne...
^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Surprise
...restaurant at 6.00 pm. while having a surprise party, you should be reached over there...
^^^^^^^^
Line 27, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... your response, Your friend, Hitesh
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, look, moreover, so, while, at least, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42079207921 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37928847055 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668316831683 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5833306677 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.7857142857 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4285714286 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17483078407 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567590636134 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566794243732 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703524336739 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468212683245 0.0580467560999 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.52 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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