You are studying for qualification and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. Write-
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off
Say how the qualification helps your job or company
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to request some time off work as I would like to complete my qualification. Let me briefly explain the situation.
To elucidate as you are aware that once a year our company provides sponsorship to its employees for skill development hence as a part of such a program I had enrolled for an executive MBA in International business. Although the course in near completion, however, I would need a few weeks off to prepare for the final examination. In lieu of this, I can work on weekends in the month of June and July to compensate for any pending work so that the ongoing projects are not affected.
Lastly, I would like to highlight that once I complete this qualification I would be able to contribute in formulating business strategies for our overseas office based in Singapore to increase the penetration of our products in South Asia region. Additionally, I would also be able to keen to impart knowledge on competition tracking, profit and loss to my peers.
I request you to approve my leave.
Your Sincerely
Saud
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, hence, however, if, lastly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78378378378 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02158777721 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632432432432 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.8212685152 44.8134815571 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306443218553 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990359330175 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852634497143 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166149071797 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069305055524 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.