You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
• Ask for some time off to complete the qualification.
• Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
• Say how the qualification helps your job or company
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in concern about requesting leave for one month (September 2020). As per the norms of the company, it is required to ask for leave ten days in advance but I am asking for leave four months earlier.
I told you earlier that, I am very keen on study and want to get an international certificate in Quality assurance program. I applied for a course at Toronto University and luckily got selected after my tremendous efforts. This is once in a lifetime opportunity as only twenty students get selected every year for this course word wide.
After completion of this course, I will be equipped with different dexterities which will be an asset for our company and help in improving the environment. Additionally, after my return to the job, I will make sure all pendency’s must be clear as a priority and if this needed extra overtime, I am ready for that also.
I hope my application for leave will be granted. I look forward to hearing positive from your end.
Yours Faithfully,
Kinnu
- Many people believe that countries should produce food for the whole population and import as little food as possible To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Throughout history male leaders have led us into violence and conflict If a society is governed by female leaders it will be more peaceful To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 89
- Subjects like arts music and drama are more important than other school subjects and therefore should be give more time in the calendar Do you agree or disagree 88
- You recently ordered something online When the delivery came it was not complete Write the letter to the company In your letter Explain what you ordered and what was missing from your delivery Explain the importance of this delivery Ask for a replacement 73
- The amount of time spends on sport and exercise should be increased in school in order to tackle the problem of overweight children Do you think this the best way to deal with the problem What other solutions can you suggest 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 338, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d every year for this course word wide. After completion of this course, I will ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 315, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ded extra overtime, I am ready for that also. I hope my application for leave wi...
^^^^
Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tive from your end. Yours Faithfully, Kinnu ...
^^^
Line 12, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m your end. Yours Faithfully, Kinnu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76111111111 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7689359279 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672222222222 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5192093371 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156603259242 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619433344725 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0185638490218 0.0603063233224 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686435278335 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357234003354 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.