You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company
Dear Manager,
Hope you are doing great...!
I am writing this letter to request for 2 days off to prepare an examination which is held next week.
To start with, I have registered for an IELTS General test on the 25th of Jan to be eligible for an onshore opportunity. As we all gathered in the same townhall last week, everybody in my team got to know about it.
I know it needs lot of practise to appear in this exam within such a short time. But, believe me, I have been training for this test for almost a month now. Unfortunately, due to some extra workload I am unable to make up for the upcoming test. I have to invest the next couple of days anyhow. Also, I assure you that I will make up after once I am done with this test.
My target is to to score band of 8.0 overall, and this will help me look proficient in foreign countries and open plenty of chances to visit onshore or to pursue master’s overseas. Therefore, requesting you to kindly approve my leave for 15th and 16th Jan.
Thankyou for your consideration. Awaiting your response.
Yours faithfully,
Lakshay
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 14, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...I am done with this test. My target is to to score band of 8.0 overall, and this wil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, therefore, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55154854941 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8148063022 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.4615384615 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3846153846 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231484717801 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772939553609 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511223003268 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119503839004 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422859915704 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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