You are visiting another town next month for a Short break. Write a letter to the tourist information centre in your letter
Tell them how long you are staying.
Ask for some suggestions for what to do
Find out if there are any local events happening at the time.
Dear sir/madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I am planning to visit surat, in the coming month for a few weeks for vacation. In this regard, I request you to provide me with some important information about my intineary.
I would like to get some information about visiting surat, as per my schedule on visiting your area at the end of the February for a fortnight, from the 14 to 28.
I would like to know which kind of accommodation can you recommended me? I am travelling alone and I don't have a car. So could you please arrange something central to the town, I don't mid range price if possible.
I would like to know is there any special event on between the days I will be there? Actually, I have heard that there is a market on the 20th of the month, but I was wondering if there's anything as going on? I am interested in most things, but would like to plan my trip as much as possible to get the most out of my stay.
I look forward to receiving your response. Yours fatefully,
Nidhi Mehta,
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| 2021-07-06 | SKN | 73 | view |
| 2020-08-24 | nidhimehta | 42 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...mmended me? I am travelling alone and I dont have a car. So could you please arrange...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...rrange something central to the town, I dont mid range price if possible. I would l...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...th of the month, but I was wondering if theres anything as going on? I am interested i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26288659794 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55572915515 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59793814433 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1824352071 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1818181818 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245334117054 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751870729465 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745757368212 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124624128508 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08456800155 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.