You are working for a company. Write a letter to your boss to propose a training course you want to attend.
• What the training course is
• Why you think this course is helpful to you
• Propose your suitable time to attend the training.
Dear Mr. Steven
I am writing to seek you approval to set up a training program on artificial intelligence, which, I think, will be very helpful for our upcoming projects.
As of now, we do not have enough understanding on AI to develop a commercial project. So the main focus of the course should be to teach practical implementation of the concepts by hands-on practical, which will come very handy in our next project. Further, classroom theory session to understand the application in depth can also be very beneficial.
The course will provide deep knowledge about this cutting-edge technology, which is the hottest topic of IT industry. At the same time, it will enhance my skills set and provide a boost start to kick off the next project where I have been assigned as a key developer.
I would be really grateful if we can set up a two hours session in the early morning everyday so that it does not affect my daily responsibility at work. Even evening session is fine for me if it is ensured to finish before 6 pm evening.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Sandip Ramani
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 94, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
...to develop a commercial project. So the main focus of the course should be to teach practi...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8520499434 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673469387755 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1784908618 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148022606923 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539425375851 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535379236683 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829486409272 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601005044623 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.