You are working for a company. You need to take some time off and want to ask your manager about this possibility.Write a letter to your manager. In your letterExplain why you want to take time offGive details of the amount of time you needSuggest how yo

Essay topics:

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off and want to ask your manager about this possibility.

Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
Explain why you want to take time off
Give details of the amount of time you need
Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away.

Dear Mr Lee,

I am writing to you in order to ask if there is any possibility to take some time off. I know it is peak season for our company, nevertheless I have a proposal about covering me while I am away, so my absence will not affect the working process.

As you are aware, I have been working efficiently and never asked for time off since our company was launched. My sister, who is the closest person to me, is getting married next week and I would like to share that happiness with her and my family. In addition, I haven’t seen them for almost 3 years and spending some time with them would motivate me for the future.

Due to this, I was hoping for two weeks vacation from 1st to 14th September. I will be back to work on Monday 15th September. I’ve already talked to Alison about the maintaining of my project throughout my leave. She is ready to take care of it, all the more so she is familiar with my responsibilities. I can assure you that she is a reliable member of our team.

Yours Sincerely,
Alex

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, so, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37628865979 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6050314308 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649484536082 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.07951663 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1818181818 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240562129878 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880598224054 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810567157834 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154419646946 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524019294323 0.0580467560999 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.