You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager in your letter explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need to suggest how your work would be covered while you are away.
Dear manager of Tesco,
I am an employee in engineering department. I have worked in this corporation since 2018 and have not had a day off in weekdays. However I am homesick by now which makes me have a journey to Iran to meet my family for a while. This is an essential requirements for me at this moment that I believe not only may help me to become refresh and recreated but also you can close my better performance at work. Much longer will be, by far better function I will propose in future.
As I explained about it is a journey to my home tone and I guess it will be as long as 2 months I know it is a bit longer than how long it should be although it is appropriate for a trip to abroad and visiting family after almost 2 years so I have written to inquire two months break.
Of course and inspired my job will be done by a friend John kit whose behavior and Performance will be acceptable I hope. Nevertheless he has got an MS degree lately, he is unemployed, yet.
I will be really grateful if you accept my inquiry of the months off. And, obviously I look forward to hearing your approve.
Faithfully yours,
Zeinab Khalaj.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...and have not had a day off in weekdays. However I am homesick by now which makes me hav...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'requirement'?
Suggestion: requirement
...amily for a while. This is an essential requirements for me at this moment that I believe no...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
..., by far better function I will propose in future. As I explained about it is a journey...
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Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
... Performance will be acceptable I hope. Nevertheless he has got an MS degree lately, he is u...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, really, so, while, i guess, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28440366972 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61373313009 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619266055046 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0545478833 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9090909091 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 4.34317383033 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1262881484 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454161936837 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463766422289 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721034859863 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506840177664 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.