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You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter•explain why you want to take time off work• give details of the amount of time you need• sugges

Essay topics: You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.

Write a letter to your manager. In your letter

•explain why you want to take time off work
• give details of the amount of time you need
• suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

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Dear Jane,

Hope you're doing well. I'm writing to inform you that I need urgent leaves in first week of coming month.

I've a very important function at my home. It will go on for at least 4 to 6 days. The total days are yet to be confirmed however, I need 6 days of leaves. Before function, I need to look after the arrangements required to be done. I'll join the company immediately after that.

As we know, by this month end, we've to deliver the major production deployment so, in next month we've to deliver production support only. I'll give a brief overview of the project to the team members. After this, I’ll arrange a query session too which will help them in learning the project theoretically and conceptually. So, in my absence, it would be easy for them to work.

I’ll share my contact details with the team. For any issues they can contact me anytime. I would really grateful if you could sanction my leaves.
Look forward for your reply.

Yours Sincerely,
Rahul

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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'really', 'so', 'well', 'at least']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.197478991597 0.220444632235 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.138655462185 0.167888034529 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0378151260504 0.0606518309736 62% => OK
Adverbs: 0.063025210084 0.0506257000042 124% => OK
Pronouns: 0.113445378151 0.118615021944 96% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0966386554622 0.107062808482 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0294117647059 0.041066498444 72% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.67343295554 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0378151260504 0.0385302599488 98% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.063025210084 0.0714148451538 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0252100840336 0.0191574576366 132% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00420168067227 0.00930345855455 45% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1034.0 1141.60824742 91% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.134020619 86% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8418079096 5.53046319177 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78085437643 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.305084745763 0.284621296913 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.254237288136 0.211203875043 120% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.169491525424 0.133321485273 127% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.107344632768 0.0843313296314 127% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67343295554 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677966101695 0.622163163488 109% => OK
Word variations: 71.4928448406 62.8969750728 114% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 12.9587628866 123% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0625 16.4300151701 67% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7812351049 44.7399317507 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.625 90.9928171075 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.0625 16.4300151701 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.613754768223 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.09278350515 0% => OK
Readability: 36.4862288136 37.5504026743 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.02666666667 1.13073093955 91% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264176762679 0.331212695627 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0971366153849 0.0927372745006 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0693830954475 0.0736520305886 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.538967396659 0.579516596996 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.17462280578 0.180689518051 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875703102789 0.122183219658 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613130300729 0.0765303033291 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.163735328709 0.211926503985 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0918085953191 0.0737400523855 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146510437009 0.203819188451 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05169884778 0.067151250289 77% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.45360824742 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.0206185567 149% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 4.73195876289 106% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.56701030928 156% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 8.32989690722 108% => OK
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Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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