You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to
Give a reason to decline the offer
Express the gratitude
Why you like current job very much
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to let you know that it would not be possible for me to accept your job offer which was given to me yesterday. The reason is that I am not so much gravitated towards your company’s perks and remuneration, which are so much pale in comparison to my current job.
I hearby thank you for considering me appropriate for manager profile at your organisation, and I sincerely apologise for the inconvenience I may have caused to you because an interview had been arranged from your side, which consumed a lot of time.
Actually, my present work is completely satisfying and I have a good rapport with my colleagues. Besides, the offer that you had given me does not influence me a lot to change my employer. I have been working here for two years and I hardly get any chance to complain. Therefore, my current job is perfect.
Looking forward to having a great collaboration between our organisations.
Yours sincerely,
Sakshi
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| 2021-01-19 | anonymous24 | 87 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 27, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...lot of time. Actually, my present work is completely satisfying and I have a good rapport with my colle...
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Line 4, column 147, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'influence'
Suggestion: influence
...he offer that you had given me does not influenced me a lot to change my employer. I have ...
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Line 4, column 269, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...and I hardly get any chance to complain.Therefore, my current job is perfect. Looking f...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 294, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce to complain.Therefore, my current job is perfect. Looking forward to have a g...
^^
Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to having'.
Suggestion: to having
...rrent job is perfect. Looking forward to have a great collaboration between our organ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, look, may, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78443113772 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14616955598 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634730538922 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.3957881191 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.875 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186955546516 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711404991966 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637733548372 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101477927443 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758594333564 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 8.62886597938 226% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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