You eat at your favourite restaurant every day for lunch. You do not like the decor they have chosen. Write the manager a letter telling him:
-What you think is great about the restaurant?
-What things you think need to be changed?
-Suggestions on ways to improve the decor?
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am your loyal customer and used to have lunch every day at your restaurant since the autumn. In fact, your chef is a true professional and the cousin is so delicious that I have become an admirer of it. However, I have noticed that your restaurant does not have enough customers and is half-full even at lunchtime. That’s why I would like to make a suggestion on how to improve the service, which you provide.
Frankly speaking, the decoration of your restaurant is completely out of taste and those artificial flowers remind me how fleeting our life is. Thus, I am sure if you change those flowers for a few fresh flowers and a couple of small decorative fountains, then the place will acquire a different atmosphere. As a result, people will be more attracted to spend quality time here.
Sincerely yours,
Mariya V.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
frankly, however, if, so, then, thus, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 706.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 149.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73825503356 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67563952912 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.704697986577 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3190078079 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.25 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 4.34317383033 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251791061671 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880170052369 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615519020928 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184115452963 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613198973047 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.