Many claim that the fast food industry had a negative effect on the environment, eating habits, and families.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Numerous people believe that the fast-food industry has a harmful influence on the environment, dietary habits, and the climate in a family. I completely agree with this notion as the habit to eat ready-to-eat food disrupts human behavior and is harmful to their health.
First of all and most important that consuming a large amount of fast food, people are significantly damaging their health due to the fact that convenience food is high in saturated fat, sugar, and salt and lacks healthy nutrients. In addition, this kind of food is highly addictive and humans tend to overeat it as they cannot cube their appetite and consume more and more junk food. Consequently, unhealthy dietary pattern leads to increasing related to it diseases such as obesity, heart attacks, severe skin issues, diabetes, different kinds of allergy.
Secondly, families no longer gather at home and cook or have dinner together. They tend to order some prepackaged food and eat it from the box watching TV without communicating with each other. Meanwhile, in the past whole family was sitting around the table eating delicious and healthy home-cooked food and discussed what had everyone been up to. For example, when I came back from school I would always find a meal that my mother cooked for our family and I felt that everyone cares about each other. However, today we have lost that feeling of unity, and one of the reasons for it is that we do not have the tradition of eating at home anymore.
In terms of the environment, the fast-food sector of the economy produces a huge amount of waste such as plastic wrappers, packages, plates, and mugs. Even usage of one-use paper containers leads to excessive cutting of trees and finally deforestation.
In conclusion, I totally agree recent growth of the fast-food industry has undesirable consequences, such as switching to an unhealthy diet, environmental issues, and lack of family communication.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79273611356 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621875 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8608476791 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.538461538 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223174608693 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727832317671 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05372353121 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118316015358 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536996572146 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.