You forgot an item of clothing at the hotel where you stayed recently. Write a letter to the hotel manager.
In your letter, you should tell:
when you stayed and in what room
describe the item you left behind
what you would like the manager to do about it.
Dear Sir,
I am writing with regard to my personal belonging that I had forgotten in the room last week.
My name is Ishween Kaur and the booking was done made in my name in Bandra branch. We occupied suite No. 201 for five nights, starting from dates 22th august to 26th August. It was a huge room with many almirahs, and I think I had left my scarf in any one of petite drawers in the almirah.
It was a red and white Gucci scarf, wherein logo is printed at each corner in bright yellow colour, making it easy to identify. This holds a special importance for me as it was gifted by my husband on our 10th wedding anniversary and I completely adore it .
I would be really thankful if you could send the scarf back to me at my personal address. I am ready to bear the courier or handling charge, which I will pay beforehand through online transaction. Therefore, I would request you to please send me the account details, where I could make the transfer.
I really look forward to hearing back from you soon.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing with regard to my personal ...
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Line 4, column 256, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ng anniversary and I completely adore it . I would be really thankful if you cou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, therefore, i think, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33684210526 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39426779981 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668421052632 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.6981566037 44.8134815571 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.4 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121241848399 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051834717648 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637809553745 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715330724324 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638622564508 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.