You had arranged to meet a friend next week but you have realized that you will not be able to go Write a letter to your friend In your letter Cancel the meeting with your friend and opologize explain why you will not be able to meet your friend suggest w

Essay topics:

You had arranged to meet a friend next week, but you have realized that you will not be able to go.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter

- Cancel the meeting with your friend and opologize.
- explain why you will not be able to meet your friend
-suggest where and when you could see each other instead

Dear Paul,

How are you? Hope you're doing well and your family is fine.

I am writing to inform you that I wont be able to come to play badminton next week as we had planned. I understand that we had planned this meeting as per my schedule and I truly apologize for cancelling at the last moment.

My company is sending me for a short training to Delhi on Monday and I will be coming back after 3 weeks. My manager has selected me to attend the training on the basis of my performance. He, also, informed me that this training is very vital for my next promotion.

However, I suggest we meet on the falling weekend after I am back from Delhi. I would like to invite you for a dinner party at my residence. This dinner would be special as I will be cooking myself. Please let me know your availability.

See you soon,
Albert

Votes
Average: 8.7 (41 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Paul, How are you? Hope youre doing well and your family is fine. ...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 683.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32278481013 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41524327887 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626582278481 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5108132016 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.9166666667 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1666666667 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242245333633 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906259397443 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541913214834 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159505419644 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076725013736 0.0580467560999 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.89 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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