You feel that the streets around your neighborhood are too dirty and have too
much rubbish. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter, you should:
• say who you are
• explain the problem and its effects on your life
• give suggestions on how to solve the problem
Dear Sir,
My name is Paul Smith. I reside in 4th road, Juhu. I am writing to inform you about the streets around my neighborhood which are too dirty and unhygienic.
Everyday too much of trash is dumped by the local people without caring about the hygiene issues. This is because of less number of dustbins on the streets. There are street hawkers and other people making it miserable for the neighborhood residents to live. In spite of several warnings, they do not tend to change and continue their daily business on the street. Moreover, this has increased number of illness in the locality and I assert that, I may fall sick too. This is only because of unhygienic conditions around the area.
I request you to kindly take necessary action on this muddle as it may give rise to more ill people in and around the community. Many residents have shown interest to protest against such people. However, we would like your participation as well. Residents have decided that along with the concerned authorities will create public awareness around the neighborhood for hygiene and eco friendly environment. At the same time, would request you to have more dumping dustbins around the neighborhood so that the garbage doesn't come out of the pit. This will help to create a clean and healthier society. Lastly, removing street hawkers will also play a vital role to avoid unhygienic condition around the area.
Looking forward to hear from you.
Yours faithfully,
Paul Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
... which are too dirty and unhygienic. Everyday too much of trash is dumped by the loca...
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Line 7, column 518, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...nd the neighborhood so that the garbage doesnt come out of the pit. This will help to ...
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Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ion around the area. Looking forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully, Paul Sm...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, lastly, look, may, moreover, so, well, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 250.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.972 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54137285734 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7309889646 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0555555556 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8888888889 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61111111111 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227070702526 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622574768828 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602938908018 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130031490057 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391791405413 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.