You had just missed a friend’s party, write a letter to apology.
In your letter, you should:
• apology to your friend
• explain why you couldn’t attend the party
• say what steps you will take to avoid in future.
Dear Jimmy,
I’m really sorry for not being able to attend the birthday party since I was out of town. However, I assure you that this will not happen again.
First of all, I express my apology to you because I could’t attend the party. Although I was not present in the party, I wish you best out of best on that important day of your life. I’m hoping that you’ll accept my apology after knowing about the reason of my absence.
Actually, on that day my sister invited me to a family get together which she arranged at her farm house. Even though you sent me invitation via mail, I could’t receive it personally due to being out of town on that day. When I got back home from the farm house, then I checked the mail box and found out about the party. I felt sorry for forgetting your birthday date.
Ever since I realized my mistake, I’ m feeling apologetic. I’ve decided that I would keep a diary wherein I’ll write down birthday dates of all my friends so that I could keep the track of upcoming parties. I assure you that this’s not going to happen again.
Please, accept my apology.
Love,
Johny.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, really, so, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67149758454 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43338277373 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613526570048 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7854442334 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3846153846 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282757714806 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990048398082 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073855227083 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154077344896 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876565983123 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.