Dear George
I hope you are doing well! How is Mary? Tell her that I asked about her too.
As I told you earlier regarding the new job that requires me to relocate to Melbourne, although me being so excited about the new role and of course Australia, I'm also a bit concerned about the shift. As you aware, I need to bring my parents also with me since there is nobody here to take care of them and certainly they will feel lonely without me here. Also, not to mention clearing the visa formalities.
Because of this sudden shift, without time for any research, I'm uncertain about different things such as food, cost of living, moreover the climatic condition and how it all will cumulatively impact our well-being.
On mentioning the above such as food, living expenses, and other necessities, I would be grateful if you could provide me some suggestion on identifying affordable accommodation with adequate comfort, and insights about the expenses and climatic conditions. This will really help me to plan a peaceful migration.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Best Wishes
Akil
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...t the new role and of course Australia, Im also a bit concerned about the shift. A...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tion clearing the visa formalities. Because of this sudden shift Im uncertain about...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 30, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ities. Because of this sudden shift Im uncertain about
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, well, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 454.0 937.175257732 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 103.0 206.0 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40776699029 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.18573250055 3.78020617076 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27109771141 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 127.690721649 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.728155339806 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 144.9 290.88556701 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9514804344 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6666666667 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156049188192 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641112583553 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498454095824 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896756000701 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04665302463 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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