Dear reena,
I Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to tell the reason behind the delay of your dress. I really apologize for this. I am in so guilt that I do not know how to tell you the truth. Finally, I dared for this.
To be honest, I have never thought that this could happened with me. Although, this has happened unintentionally but I am feeling very bad. I know it is one of your favorite dress and close to your heart as It was gifted by your father.
I wore this dress on my brother’s marriage and everyone loved it a lot. When I was having a coffee there. Someone kicked me in a rush and whole cup of coffee was splashed on the dress. I tried to clean it with water immediately but stains of coffee did not remove.
Now I have send this dress to the dry cleaner for cleaning. He give me assurance that dress will be clean like new one . It will be available to me by next week and then back it to you soon.
I am really sorry for this mishappening. Hope you forgive me. Looking forward to hear from you.
Best wishes
Gurjeet kaur
Votes
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... reason behind the delay of your dress. I really apologize for this. I am in so g...
^
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...our dress. I really apologize for this. I am in so guilt that I do not know how t...
^
Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'happen'
Suggestion: happen
...t, I have never thought that this could happened with me. Although, this has happened un...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 73, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s marriage and everyone loved it a lot. When I was having a coffee there. Someone ki...
^^^^
Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'sent'.
Suggestion: sent
...of coffee did not remove. Now I have send this dress to the dry cleaner for clean...
^^^^
Line 9, column 64, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
...ess to the dry cleaner for cleaning. He give me assurance that dress will be clean l...
^^^^
Line 9, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ce that dress will be clean like new one . It will be available to me by next week...
^^
Line 11, column 79, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...g. Hope you forgive me. Looking forward to hear from you. Best wishes Gurjeet kau...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, really, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23557692308 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29668062181 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591346153846 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.4414102153 44.8134815571 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 46.3684210526 76.5299724578 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.9473684211 16.8248392259 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42105263158 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179118017127 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576313867691 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476189850615 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107304962247 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637357477771 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.0 8.37731958763 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 7.45979381443 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.13 8.71597938144 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.18 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... reason behind the delay of your dress. I really apologize for this. I am in so g...
^
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...our dress. I really apologize for this. I am in so guilt that I do not know how t...
^
Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'happen'
Suggestion: happen
...t, I have never thought that this could happened with me. Although, this has happened un...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 73, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s marriage and everyone loved it a lot. When I was having a coffee there. Someone ki...
^^^^
Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'sent'.
Suggestion: sent
...of coffee did not remove. Now I have send this dress to the dry cleaner for clean...
^^^^
Line 9, column 64, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
...ess to the dry cleaner for cleaning. He give me assurance that dress will be clean l...
^^^^
Line 9, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ce that dress will be clean like new one . It will be available to me by next week...
^^
Line 11, column 79, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...g. Hope you forgive me. Looking forward to hear from you. Best wishes Gurjeet kau...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, really, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23557692308 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29668062181 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591346153846 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.4414102153 44.8134815571 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 46.3684210526 76.5299724578 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.9473684211 16.8248392259 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42105263158 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179118017127 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576313867691 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476189850615 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107304962247 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637357477771 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.0 8.37731958763 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 7.45979381443 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.13 8.71597938144 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.18 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.