Dear Reena,
I Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to apologize you to getting back so late regarding the return of your dress. I am in so guilt that I do not know how to tell you the truth. Finally, I dared for this.
To be honest, I have never thought that this could happened with me. Although, this has happened unintentionally but I am feeling very bad. I know it is one of your favorite dress and close to your heart as It was gifted by your father.
I wore this dress on my brother’s marriage and everyone loved it a lot. When I was having a coffee there. Someone kicked me in a rush and whole cup of coffee was splashed on the dress. I tried to clean it with water immediately but stains of coffee did not remove.
Now I have send this dress to the dry cleaner for cleaning. He give me assurance that dress will be clean like new one . It will be available to me by next week and then back it to you soon.
I am really sorry for this mishappening. Hope you forgive me.
Best wishes and looking forward to hearing from you
Gurjeet kaur
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 55, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... doing well. I am writing this letter to apologize you to getting back so late re...
^^
Line 4, column 51, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st, I have never thought that this could happened with me. Although, this has hap...
^^
Line 4, column 53, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'happen'
Suggestion: happen
..., I have never thought that this could happened with me. Although, this has happened un...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 73, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s marriage and everyone loved it a lot. When I was having a coffee there. Someone ki...
^^^^
Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'sent'.
Suggestion: sent
...of coffee did not remove. Now I have send this dress to the dry cleaner for clean...
^^^^
Line 8, column 64, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
...ess to the dry cleaner for cleaning. He give me assurance that dress will be clean l...
^^^^
Line 8, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ce that dress will be clean like new one . It will be available to me by next we...
^^
Line 8, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at dress will be clean like new one . It will be available to me by next week an...
^^
Line 8, column 152, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...new one . It will be available to me by next week and then back it to you soon. ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, really, regarding, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.2077294686 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33512837318 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589371980676 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.4422365026 44.8134815571 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 51.2352941176 76.5299724578 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1764705882 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35294117647 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188468613984 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603238898355 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546331848676 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101971182489 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631736385982 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.5 8.37731958763 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.25 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.21 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 55, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... doing well. I am writing this letter to apologize you to getting back so late re...
^^
Line 4, column 51, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st, I have never thought that this could happened with me. Although, this has hap...
^^
Line 4, column 53, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'happen'
Suggestion: happen
..., I have never thought that this could happened with me. Although, this has happened un...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 73, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s marriage and everyone loved it a lot. When I was having a coffee there. Someone ki...
^^^^
Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'sent'.
Suggestion: sent
...of coffee did not remove. Now I have send this dress to the dry cleaner for clean...
^^^^
Line 8, column 64, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
...ess to the dry cleaner for cleaning. He give me assurance that dress will be clean l...
^^^^
Line 8, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ce that dress will be clean like new one . It will be available to me by next we...
^^
Line 8, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at dress will be clean like new one . It will be available to me by next week an...
^^
Line 8, column 152, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...new one . It will be available to me by next week and then back it to you soon. ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, really, regarding, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.2077294686 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33512837318 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589371980676 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.4422365026 44.8134815571 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 51.2352941176 76.5299724578 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1764705882 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35294117647 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188468613984 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603238898355 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546331848676 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101971182489 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631736385982 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.5 8.37731958763 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.25 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.21 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.