Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in regard to the problem that I encountered with my recent purchase of Iphone 11 and the inconvenience from your service staff.
Purchasing was done on my sister name Liza Walter, on 29 February from one of your authorized store at Trillium, Amritsar. This is one of the premium phone with best security features that are designed especially for business class people and the primary reason for me to have it. Though it comes with 1 year international warranty but after 4-5 days it stopped functioning.
For this reason, I had to rush to one of the service centre in my town and after precheck your representative informed to wait for 6 days. As per them its hardware needs to be replaced for which they need time. Though, it contains some vital files related to my business I had to left it because of no other alternative.
After waiting for the given period when I came to collect it, I get to know it was still not replaced. Even I asked your manager but he was not addressing me adequately. This was highly disappointing from such an esteemed brand. Now, its a humble request to you to provide my phone on priority, if there is a major problem than do provide me a new one.
I hope you will take prompt action on it and act immediately to sort the issue. Job card detail along with invoice copy is attached for reference.
Yours faithfully,
Sims Cokk.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the best'.
Suggestion: with the best
...itsar. This is one of the premium phone with best security features that are designed esp...
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Line 9, column 235, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...nting from such an esteemed brand. Now, its a humble request to you to provide my p...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 253.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59683794466 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64590188083 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 127.690721649 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660079051383 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2000641094 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0714285714 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121161689933 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378434594354 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308888783274 0.0603063233224 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653310451504 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031380462619 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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