You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course.
Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter
describe the situation
explain why you cannot continue at this time
say what action you would like to take
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am the student of Project Management part-time course in your institution. I am writing to let you know that I cannot continue this course from 20th April’18 onwards.
Let me explain my situation in more details. I work for a Construction Company and have project sites all across the region. As I was deputed to the Head Office which is near to your institution so that it was easy for me to attend the part-time evening course for Project Management Training. But now I have been transferred temporarily for 1 month to a project site which is 40km from our office and the working hours are also not convenient enough for me to attend the evening classes. Although public transportation is available but in the evening time most of the buses are overcrowded which I really can’t afford to commute daily on cost of getting tired and exhausted.
Therefore I humbly request you to allow me in next available batch as I will be transferred to back to the Head Office next month. This would be helpful for me to manage my office work in one hand and complete the course on other hand.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Rakesh Soni
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...cost of getting tired and exhausted. Therefore I humbly request you to allow me in nex...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, really, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75480769231 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76652094312 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581730769231 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4108306815 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9090909091 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192949352907 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764121100545 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647660936795 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141645866096 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703466741098 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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