An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems do this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?
Nowadays, more and more professionals from underdeveloped or developing countries are choosing to live and work in richer countries. In this essay we will discuss the problems arise due to such migration including skill shortage and economic instability. This essay will also suggest the solutions to these problems including increasing salary scale and offering better standard of living.
One of the major problems caused by such brain-drain is shortage of skilled professionals, leaving poorer countries to struggle for their development and improving living standards of its citizens. Due to lack of skilled professionals such as doctors and teachers, the citizen of these countries struggle to get basic facilities such as medical and education. For instance, a recent survey conducted by WHO (World Health Organization) revealed that the fatality rate is high in an underdeveloped countries due to unavailability of proper medical facility. In addition to this, because of such migration of professionals, poor countries depends on foreign technical aid which cost them billion dollars which further aggravates their economic instability issues. To illustrate, in 2011 the economy of Venezuela almost collapsed due to their huge spending’s to get foreign technical aid. In other words, the migration of a skilled professionals from underdeveloped or developing country creates problems for their government such as skill shortage and economy related issues.
However, there are various solutions to these problems such as offering better pay scale and offering better living conditions. One of the reasons professionals leave their county is to get better salaries and benefits. So the government can offer better salaries along with incentives to required skilled professionals to entice them to live and work in their country. Another possible solution is improving standard of living, as every professionals look for better standard of living. The government of these countries can spend their budget to improve standard of living of its citizens by borrowing funds from external banks. For example, underdeveloped countries like Bangladesh took long-term loan from World Bank in 2010, to improve their education and medical facility. In short, better pay scale and good standard of living are the best possible solutions to be undertaken by developing/underdeveloped countries to overcome the problems arise by such brain drain.
In conclusion, with the increasing number of migration of professionals from poorer countries generate problems such as skill shortage and economic instability. The best possible solutions to these problems are providing better salaries and offer better standard of living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in short, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2322.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71921182266 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2108365315 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443349753695 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 711.0 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5819479671 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257889915068 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914503051196 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500730858108 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175579587487 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299458563373 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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