You have had a bank account for a few years Recently you received a letter from the bank stating that your account is 240 overdrawn and that you will be charged 70 which will be taken directly from your account You know that this information is incorr

Respected Sir,

I am a regular customer of ICICI Bank for the last 5 years.Yesterday,I have received a letter from your bank,stating that I have exceeded the Bank amount with $240 since then I was in a dilemma that I have not used it then how this can be plausible.I am writing this letter to inform you that the information is all incorrect and would like to elucidate this matter.

A couple of months ago,I purchased a Maruti Car and currently,I am paying EMI of $240 each month but as I can see how it was deducted twice in a single month, which is wrong and not acceptable.EMI should be charged once a month. Furthermore,the bank has also deducted $70 extra as the penalty charge.And what to do now as I'm not sure.

I would request you to please address it wisely and if possible adjust this extra amount in an upcoming month and see if penalty charges can be refundable.I belong to a normal family and even a single penny means a lot to me.

Hope you can understand the criticalities here.

Sincerely

Alex

Votes
Average: 5.7 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30256410256 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53459949673 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594871794872 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9898062966 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274710030387 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829939532015 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757753277957 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153091114867 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103059046561 0.0580467560999 178% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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