You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that noise may disturb your neighbor.Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter:•introduce yourself•describe your plans for the party•invite your neighbor to

Essay topics:

You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that noise may disturb your neighbor.

Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter:

• introduce yourself

• describe your plans for the party

• invite your neighbor to come

Dear Mr. Johnson,

I am writing this letter with regard to a party that I am planning to celebrate my new house in Ho Chi Minh City.

As I have just settled in the town, I would like to give an introduction about myself. My name is Truong Nguyen and I come with a family of four. My hometown is in Danang, but my wife and I have decided to move to Ho Chi Minh City for my new job and better education for my two sons.

As for the celebration party, I will organize it on the next Saturday night. It will be a small barbeque party in my backyard with some friends and relatives. Also, we may do some karaoke so I am quite worried that you may be disturbed during this time but I will try my best to reduce the noise.

If you are free on that day, it would be my pleasure to have you and your family in my party. I think it would be a great opportunity for me to know about my next-door neighbor.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards,

Truong Nguyen

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, as for, i think, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.18041237113 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27433522187 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572164948454 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2724929702 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7272727273 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182050032428 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616827487582 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563065932937 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971240500582 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516652437584 0.0580467560999 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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