You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect Write a letter to the editor of the magazine In your letter correct the information in the article explain why it is impor

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You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.

Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter
correct the information in the article
explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir,

I am a long-standing reader of your magazine " The destinations". I am writing this letter mainly to draw your immediate attention and correct the false information published about my city Surat
on the December 2019 monthly edition, page number 19 under the heading " Virtual visit to Surat"

I am glad to read the article about my city in such an esteemed magazine. According to the article the city does not have direct overseas destinations connectivity; whereas the fact is the airport connects to several countries such as Dubai, Australia, Singapore and few more. Another one is that the city have extremely few tourist places; however, the truth is the city has large the number of tourist areas such as Gir Safari, Kanha National park, Science museum and many more.

Therefore, I believe it is extremely crucial for you and your team to publish correct information as you have over one lakh subscribers. Such facts shall prevent tourists to visit my city. I hereby would like to request you to kindly cease the distribution of this editorial instantaneously, edit the details, and re-distribute it.

I hope you would understand the graveness of misleading the people and would do the necessary changes at the earliest.

Thanking you in advance.

Your faithfully
Joe Peter

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nformation published about my city Surat on the December 2019 monthly edition, pa...
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Line 4, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ding ' Virtual visit to Surat' I am glad to read the article about my c...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...' Virtual visit to Surat' I am glad to read the article about my ci...
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Line 6, column 139, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'destinations'' or 'destination's'?
Suggestion: destinations'; destination's
... the city does not have direct overseas destinations connectivity; whereas the fact is the a...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dit the details, and re-distribute it. I hope you would understand the gravenes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, therefore, whereas, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20930232558 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98986931998 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.6697755853 44.8134815571 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 76.5299724578 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189973281729 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667458252978 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582911228808 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746443995908 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548295704214 0.0580467560999 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 8.37731958763 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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