In recent years, many small local shops have closed customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping.
Is this a positive or negative development?
In this day and age, shopping has become an integral part of people's lives. In this regard, people seem to be changing their shopping pattern. They are traveling a long distance to shop from the shopping complex, and this has led to the closure of tiny retail shops. Despite minimal damaging effects, it has several remarkable advantages. Hence, in my opinion, it is a positive advancement. My inclination is justified further with suitable examples.
Discussing the positive influences. The biggest advantage is it is time-saving. In other words, purchasing at a shopping arcade offer a spectrum of commodities under one roof. For example,
groceries, clothes, utensils, motor vehicles, day-to-day needs and lots more. Moreover, the buyer generally does not have to move around the city and browse each and every shop to buy the needful product. Consequently, it saves the most precious thing of a person- Time. Another point to consider is it saves a considerable amount of fuels and gas.
Similarly, shopping at galleria alleviates traffic congestion from the city center. This is to say that such a big mall offers various parking facility: parking underground and valet parking. For instance, it is often the case when people while shopping at the street leave their vehicles at inapposite places, which not only cause inconvenience to the traffic around; but also to the shop owners. Thus, access to such malls would divert the traffic problem, owing they provide parking convenience. Shopping under fully air-conditioned ambiance is an additional positive aspect of this trend.
On the other side, shopping malls have few visible detrimental effects. The worst one is it is not suitable for certain sections of society. To illustrate, the middle-class and lower class. since such a place sells mainly branded and luxurious commodity, which certainly is not affordable for such people. Furthermore, shopping from such large concrete building swallow business of small
businessmen who earn their livelihood on the basis of daily sale from such small retail shops.
Thus, in the light of the above discussion, it can be said that in spite of the debates regarding the positive and negative effects of shopping from large malls. I vote that considering its
long-term effects on individual as well as society it is indeed positive progress and not negative progress.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2006.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27894736842 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81977583046 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592105263158 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.696541823 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.24 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289186206667 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675442890406 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628671051922 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112361697117 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055892371331 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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