You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make.
Write a letter to the bank manager. In your
Introduce yourself
Explain that you did not buy the items listed
Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to lodge a complaint about recently issued statement by your bank against my credit card. I have been loyal customer of ICICI bank for ten years and I am holding Gold membership of credit card. I did not face any discrepancy, however, I was so surprised to notice some unwanted transaction in the credit card statement.
Allow me to elaborate, Firstly, I would like to grab your attention on the purchase of Samsung mobile phone worth rupees 25,000-/ through the online shopping website. Secondly, next transaction I found doubtful regarding the money spent on buying the grocery items on the Reliance retail shop in another city. Last but not the least, also noticed two transaction stating paying the electricity bills. I can assure you that I did not make any aforementioned transaction using my credit card. Moreover, during this statement period I was in the Dubai on business trip and I was away from the home country.
Furthermore, I would like you to make the initial investigation in this regard and do the needful on the urgent basis. I would really appreciate it if you could arrange a new credit card to avoid any further confusion.
I hope your bank will take the necessary actions to solve my problem I explained in this letter
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Deepak Sharma
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...holding Gold membership of credit card. I did not face any discrepancy, however, ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y problem I explained in this letter I look forward to hearing from you. Y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, really, regarding, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89316239316 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71037554286 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5879152789 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4166666667 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 4.34317383033 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340408848878 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108258635941 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696212121708 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172314320994 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330029406931 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.