Dear ABC,
Hi, How are you? I hope everything would be find in your resort where we have spent our last weekend. I have enjoyed a lot there. Your Idea to get close to nature was superb.
I had never imagined myself being this much closer to nature. It was a great experience and i hope we will also plan this kind of weekend in near future.I just want to inform you that i have missed my Summer coat there which you might remember we bought from Pantaloons. It is white leather coat with some embroidery work on Collar and shoulder side. It may have some important paper in it with around 1000 Rupees. When i was searching for one important piece of paper i remember that it was in my coat and when i searched in my cupboard i found that i left that coat in your resort.
Please inform to housekeeping at resort to collect that and help to dispatch me to my home address. i am sending my home address postal details to you with this letter.
Thanks and Regards,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...o nature. It was a great experience and i hope we will also plan this kind of wee...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...lan this kind of weekend in near future.I just want to inform you that i have mis...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...per in it with around 1000 Rupees. When i was searching for one important piece o...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rching for one important piece of paper i remember that it was in my coat and whe...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...emember that it was in my coat and when i searched in my cupboard i found that i ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...coat and when i searched in my cupboard i found that i left that coat in your res...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... i searched in my cupboard i found that i left that coat in your resort. Pleas...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...help to dispatch me to my home address. i am sending my home address postal detai...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...help to dispatch me to my home address. i am sending my home address postal detai...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3152173913 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25351542219 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2714371368 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.1666666667 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273849034196 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820648334042 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062657057514 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171462127791 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497083289501 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.