You have lost your credit card.Write a letter to the manager of your bank. In the letter explain how you lost the card ask the manger to cancel the old card and to issue you a replacement | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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You have lost your credit card.Write a letter to the manager of your bank. In the letter explain how you lost the card ask the manger to cancel the old card and to issue you a replacement

Dear Sir,

I am writing to inform you that I have lost my ICICI credit visa card (Number:6766877) on 26 July 2019 that was issued to me on 1 July 2019 by the bank. I am, Sita Bhardwaj, a prominent customer of your organization, having a salary account(Number: 8798890090) with your bank from last 3 years.

Recently, I went to the mall to do some purchasing. As I reached to Payment counter, I realized that I have missed the card. I tried to find it out every possible place, but couldn't trace it. Immediately, I blocked the card by connecting with one of your call centers. The complain number is #787899890.

Currently, I am facing a liquidity crunch due to which I am unable to pay other bills. I would be grateful if you could issue me a new card by blocking the previous one.

Looking forward to your positive action towards the incident.

Thanks for all help and support.

Yours Sincerely,

XUF

thank you,

Anshu Bhardwaj

Sr. Executive-Human Resources

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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you that I have...
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Line 3, column 3, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you that I have lo...
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Line 3, column 3, Rule ID: I_A[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am' (first person of "to be")?
Suggestion: am
Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you that I have lo...
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Line 3, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you that I have lost...
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Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...form you that I have lost my existing ICICI credit visa card Number:6766877 on 2...
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Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...o find it out every possible place, but couldnt trace it. Immediately, I blocked the ca...
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Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nnecting with one of your call centers. I would like to request you to issue the...
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Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... the consideration. Yours Sincerely, XUF -- thank you, ...
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Line 16, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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.... Yours Sincerely, XUF -- thank you, Anshu Bhardwaj ...
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Line 19, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...rs Sincerely, XUF -- thank you, Anshu Bhardwaj Sr. Exec...
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Line 26, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hardwaj Sr. Executive-Human Resources Yatra.Com | HM Vibha Towers | No 66/5 -...
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Line 28, column 7, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Com
...Sr. Executive-Human Resources Yatra.Com | HM Vibha Towers | No 66/5 - 25 | 7th...
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Line 28, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Executive-Human Resources Yatra.Com | HM Vibha Towers | No 66/5 - 25 | 7th f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17045454545 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05026792342 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.778409090909 0.622605031667 125% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8639178253 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313898709236 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976610993127 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905996563902 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112551447659 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969962984686 0.0580467560999 167% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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