You have lost your student identification card This has created some problems for you Write a letter to the director of student services In your letter Advise them of your situation Explain how this is affecting you Request a new card

Dear Mr. John,

I am writing this letter to inform you about loss of my college ID card due to which I am getting trouble since several days while entering in to the campus.

In addition, even I ain't aware where did I kept my badge last, along with my co-ordinator and other tutors are keep asking for the same while counting attendance. Moreover, they are asking to obtain a latest pass as soon as possible since our exams are near besides, invigilator will not be allowing student who have not received permit. There would be inconvenience form we to appear in the exam hall.

So, I would like to look in to my issue and please do needful help to print a brand new Identification card before exam otherwise it might get negative impact in my future study.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Yours faithfully,
Kate

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Mr. John, I am writing this letter to inform y...
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...ce. Moreover, they are asking to obtain a latest pass as soon as possible since o...
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...form we to appear in the exam hall. So, I would like to look in to my issue ...
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...negative impact in my future study. Thank you for your time and consideratio...
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...you for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Kate
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...nd consideration. Yours faithfully, Kate
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...ration. Yours faithfully, Kate
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, moreover, so, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 698.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 149.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68456375839 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58964756138 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.744966442953 0.622605031667 120% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.0422154905 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7142857143 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 4.34317383033 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201827289239 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955666498083 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851205069167 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139100250135 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812064989392 0.0580467560999 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.