You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you.Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letteradvise them of your situationexplain how this is affecting yourequest a new card

Essay topics:

You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you.
Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter
advise them of your situation
explain how this is affecting you
request a new card

Dear Sir,

I am writing to inform you about the loss of identification card on 21st of June in college campus. I have lost this card during my travel from hostel to college. This card is very useful and mandatory to me, without this card I cannot enter the college premises and apart from that my final terms are next week for which I required new one on urgent basis.

This card is also use for access to library, computer class and for the several discounts too which are available for student on books, games and clothing. Apart from that I have to returned a book which I borrowed from state library with two days else they would fine me 100 rupees per day. Being a student I cannot afford that much amount to pay as a fine.

Therefore, I am requesting you for a new card. It would be great if you take this issue on high priority as they staff will only then allow me to sit in exams.

I am waiting to hear from you as earliest as possible.

Your Faithfully,

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t as possible. Your Faithfully,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, therefore, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.375 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24423621128 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630434782609 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.8227223835 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4444444444 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306335554313 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125040447185 0.0766984524023 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653943996951 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152024029496 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640607002631 0.0580467560999 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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