You have a meeting with your manager the next day Write a letter telling him her what you are going to discuss in the meeting In your letter you should tell what you have done for the company in the year you worked there what changes you would like to rec

Essay topics:

You have a meeting with your manager the next day. Write a letter telling him/her what you are going to discuss in the meeting.

In your letter, you should tell:
- what you have done for the company in the year you worked there?
- what changes you would like to recommend?
- what training you require?

Dear Mr Singh,

I am writing this letter to share the agenda with you for the meeting which is scheduled for tomorrow.

With regard to my role, I have been working diligently on the MoW project as a team leader for the past year in the organization. I feel valued for my contribution to the success of this project. I am also proud to say that with my innovative idea to automate manual testing, not only the company generated more revenue but also won new customers.

As for the recommendation, may I suggest that our team sync up meetings should be time-bound. To do this, you could ask the team to close the action items and send the status to you beforehand by mail so that those points can be skipped in the meeting. This practice would allow more time for other topics of discussion.

As far as the training is concerned, I was wondering if you could recommend my name for the training which is organized by the enterprise to improve soft skills. By gaining such skills, I would be able to interact effectively with customers and other stakeholders.

I look forward to seeing you at the meeting tomorrow.

Yours sincerely,
Ell Green

Votes
Average: 8 (6 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, as for, i feel, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68137254902 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73001370278 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4537847024 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8181818182 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 4.34317383033 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27091029397 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945994616331 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721741934833 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161207737368 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709962521929 0.0580467560999 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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