You have a pen friend living in another country and her/ he curious to learn about the major buildings in your country. Write a letter to your pen friend. In your letter:
Greet your friend and say why you are writing
Briefly describe a recently built architectural marvel in your country
Explain why people are interested in
Dear Jack,
I hope this letter finds you well. I received your email last week, but unfortunately, I've been really busy with my work these days. I hope you will accept my apology for the delay. I've realized that you're interested in getting some information about the buildings which are primary in my country. That's interesting! I can give you some information in this case.
The buildings which have been constructing these days are quite different from the ancient ones in terms of architecture and facilities. Those which can be seen nowadays are totally modern and exotic in look. Why don't you come to see closely all types of buildings in my city?
These kinds of buildings have become extremely popular recently. Most people would prefer to live where is not only up-to-date, but also comfortable. That's why architects have strictly considered both aspects. If you have any questions else, just let me know.
I hope you will find the information useful.
All the best,
Sarah Smith
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| 2018-10-25 | Mehdi.Babaie | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...our email last week, but unfortunately, Ive been really busy with my work these day...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...en really busy with my work these days. I hope you will accept my apology for the...
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Suggestion: I've
...u will accept my apology for the delay. Ive realized that youre interested in getti...
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Suggestion: you're
...pology for the delay. Ive realized that youre interested in getting some information ...
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Suggestion: That's
...ldings which are primary in my country. Thats interesting! I can give you some inform...
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Suggestion: don't
... totally modern and exotic in look. Why dont you come to see closely all types of bu...
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Suggestion: That's
... only up-to-date, but also comfortable. Thats why architects have strictly considered...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03592814371 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64417197845 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688622754491 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4798532443 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.0714285714 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.9285714286 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64285714286 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186276586626 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574107488203 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391913191321 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979462015966 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455429722163 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.06 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.