You have a problem with a neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter:Describe the problemSay how long it has been a problemExplain what action you want the neighbour to take

Essay topics:

You have a problem with a neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter:

Describe the problem
Say how long it has been a problem
Explain what action you want the neighbour to take

Dear Mr Thomas

I am writing to complain about the constant barking of your dog. Actually I have been struggling to study or fall asleep at night because of this problem. The dog begins barking just after the sunset and continues through the night until the dawn breaks. The bark is very loud and severe that I can neither study nor sleep.

This has been the case since I moved in three months ago. I always wanted to tell you about it but hoped that you would take action to deal with the problem. Unfortunately, it has been a long time since I have begun struggling with this.

The dog could be barking because of hunger or it may have a health problem. I suggest that you take it to a vet to rule out any health issues. I am sorry for suggesting this but I have no other option left.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours Sincerely

XXX

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, look, may, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 705.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40625 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20580732103 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63125 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.3400176564 44.8134815571 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.75 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226213180237 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790584665539 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656303281514 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121980687937 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638835163661 0.0580467560999 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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