You have purchased some goods from a company and the goods were supposed to be delivered within three days of purchase. Seven days have already gone and you have not received the products yet.Write a letter to a company manager with whom you arranged the

Essay topics:

You have purchased some goods from a company and the goods were supposed to be delivered within three days of purchase. Seven days have already gone and you have not received the products yet.

Write a letter to a company manager with whom you arranged the delivery of goods. In your letter:

• inform him/her what items you have purchased

• ask the reason for the delay in delivery

• suggest what can be done about the matter

Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to complain about the delay of delivering the good I purchase from your company to my address.

On 25th of September I visited your company Croma and purchase Samsung Television, Philips Hair Straightener and Sony Music System. I made the payment through by Axis Bank Credit Card. My invoice number is 2566566. The employee of the company assured me that the products I purchased will be delivered to my address till 28th of September.

Unfortunately, it is 1st of October and still I have not received the products to my address. I want to know the exact reason for the delay in delivering the products to my address? Are there some issues with the products I purchase or with the delivery chain?

I would like to please deliver the products as soon as possible to my address. Otherwise I would like to cancel my order and moreover, will give instructions to my bank to reverse the credit card payment.

I hope you will take my matter into consideration and will take necessary actions to get it resolved immediately. I am attaching the copy of the receipt for your reference.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Prabhpreet Kaur

Votes
Average: 7.5 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 80, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
...ucts as soon as possible to my address. Otherwise I would like to cancel my order and mor...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...py of the receipt for your reference. I look forward to hearing from you soon. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, so, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85096153846 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76856295366 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586538461538 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6207346175 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0714285714 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8571428571 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.78571428571 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19056387089 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643892022837 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597037622531 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106783469652 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565157990806 0.0580467560999 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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