You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.
Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter:
explain why you are writing
express concern about the missing card
ask them what they intend to do
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing to notify you that I have received the package which contains a cheque book and a pin code of a bank card along with the account information, as was informed earlier. Unfortunately, there was no credit card in it.
It is intriguing that all the other documents related to the account are present but the card is missing. As the card has already been activated, I am concerned that if it lands in the wrong hands they might withdraw the funds present in the account which is all the hard earned money I accumulated over the years.
Therefore, I would request you to deactivate the card at the earliest possible in order to prevent any theft. Also, could you please cross check with your staff if they have misplaced the card by accident? If not, kindly issue a new card and notify me, when I can come over to collect the same so as to prevent the incident from recurring.
Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing the measure that you would take.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 295, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...hen I can come over to collect the same so as to prevent the incident from recurring. ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55675675676 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55914543236 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627027027027 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4297159362 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291813779699 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106060096973 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524700573331 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159819211113 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664046269666 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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