You have recently applied for a course at a college and have been accepted. However, you cannot join the course due to some reasons.
Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter:
• which course you have been applied for
• why you cannot join the course
• ask about the possibility of the course in the future
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to notify you that I will not be able to join the course of your college for which I applied and was accepted. Let me explain the reasons for not attending the course in detail.
I applied and got selected for Advertising and Marketing course from Amity University on 24th September as this course would have helped me enhance my promotional and marketing skills which will aid me to enhance my career and future prospects.
However, I regret to inform you that I will not be able to join the course as i gave an interview in McKinney company and have been selected for the job as an assistant manager with a decent salary and have accepted the offer. This will give me the opportunity to have practical experience of the work culture and market. Moreover, it will help me to make good contacts which will be beneficial in future.
I would like to request you to consider me for the course in next year semester as I am willing to join the course to increase my knowledge and expertise. Moreover, if you could provide me the university handbook containing details of the various courses and their fees.
I hope to hearing from you soon.
Your sincerely,
Prabhpreet Kaur
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... will not be able to join the course as i gave an interview in McKinney company a...
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Line 7, column 396, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... good contacts which will be beneficial in future. I would like to request you to consi...
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Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oon. Your sincerely, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56519919569 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532407407407 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.8917019395 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.8 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370337509429 0.216113520407 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146065758308 0.0766984524023 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0975461286341 0.0603063233224 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214846210622 0.12726935374 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809933323204 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.