You have recently attended a job interview which went well, but you are still waiting for the decision. Write a letter to HR manager of the company and say
– Give details of the job.
– Why do you think the interview went well?
– Why do you need to know the result?
Dear Sir,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to follow-up on a recent interview I had with your esteemed organization for the role of Senior Sales Engineer. The position was based in Dubai with regional support to the Middle East and Europe markets.
It was long hiring process of two months and I had gone through an individual round of interviews with human resource, hiring manager and managing director. In each of the interviews, I received positive feedback from each of the interviewers which gave a positive sign of getting through the selection process.
After this, the human resource executive had sent me an email confirming that the team based in Dubai was very comfortable with my skill set and HR department was preparing an effective package but it has been a few weeks now and I have had no communication since then. Hence I request you to give me an update as soon as possible as I have an offer from another company so I need to decide.I would like to highlight here that I am keen on this role as this role is based out of India and promises better growth opportunities than the one I am being offered.
I look forward to your immediate response.
Yours Sincerely
Mick
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Hope you are doing well. I am writing th...
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Line 6, column 271, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...I have had no communication since then. Hence I request you to give me an update as s...
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Line 6, column 392, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...rom another company so I need to decide.I would like to highlight here that I am ...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur immediate response. Yours Sincerely Mick
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, look, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66511627907 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65743851262 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646511627907 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.4035955745 44.8134815571 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 111.444444444 76.5299724578 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8888888889 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152289636754 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657344277288 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830963690445 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835776006297 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696764137508 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.