You have recently bought a toy online and after receiving it you discovered a problem with it. Write a letter to the online store you bought it from and say
- Describe the toy.
- Explain the problem.
- Suggest how it could be solved.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to complaint you about the problem which I found in the received item bought from your store. It is a flying drone controlled by remote controller and it can record videos also whose display can be seen on controller itself.
Let me explain my problem in detail. I had ordered this drone of worth Rs.10000 INR from your website on Monday 16th october. Though, I received my parcel on the very next day, however, I am facing plethora of issues in operating this. The first and the foremost problem, Drone is not able to fly as its fans are not working properly. Secondly, Even video recording is not working though its indicating. Furthermore, after 10 minutes of use, toy showing low battery indicator which is exacerbating the issues.
Would you replace my order with new one? You can tell you sales team to check if the device is working properly with all the features which are mentioned on the website and then deliver it again to the same address. My order number is P1103649 with name John smith as owner.
I hope you consider my suggestion and do the needful.
I look forward to get a working toy as soon as possible.
Yours truly
John
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 389, Rule ID: IT_IS[7]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...n video recording is not working though its indicating. Furthermore, after 10 minut...
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Line 10, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to getting'.
Suggestion: to getting
...n and do the needful. I look forward to get a working toy as soon as possible. Y...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67142857143 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46674480479 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647619047619 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7385570289 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0714285714 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253895825427 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761039432904 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672402908592 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127049779613 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391916179503 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.