You have recently bought a toy over the internet. When it was delivered you have found some problems with it. Write a letter to the toy company manager and say
- Give details of the purchase.
- Describe the problem.
- What do you expect the company to do about it?
Dear Sir or Madam,
Hello. This is Darby Shin who bought a robot toy for my boy from you on 13th of May, 2018. I am writing this letter to let you know I have received it with some problems.
Firstly, my son was really happy when he got it at first but when he found that there were some problems, he was crying and depressed all day. It made me feel really bad.
The problems are the robot’s arm and scratches. One of the arms of the robot was defective. It cannot lift it properly but the other one is fine. Also, there are some scratches on the head part. I think when it had been delivering, it might be damaged at that time.
If it is the right product, I do not think it is worth $99. If you agree it has problems, I would like to get the new product if I can get it in a week. Otherwise, I would like to get my money back in full. Also, if you want to get the product which has problems back, you can send me one of your staff to pick it up or I can send it to you if you pay shipping cost.
I was quite disappointed even though I paid that much money. I want to hear your response as soon as possible.
Sincerely yours,
Darby Shin.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'May 2018'.
Suggestion: May 2018
...obot toy for my boy from you on 13th of May, 2018. I am writing this letter to let you kn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, really, so, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 3.95278969957 4.54256449028 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16427346881 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575107296137 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8812921733 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.1764705882 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7058823529 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82352941176 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.49484536082 602% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247762685901 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561842194758 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676745139634 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110545122931 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772454687546 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.0 8.37731958763 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 92.12 70.7449484536 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.6 7.45979381443 48% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.04 8.71597938144 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.11 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 8.15463917526 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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