You have recently moved to a different house Write a letter to an English speaking friend In your letter explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit

Essay topics:

You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
explain why you have moved
describe the new house
invite your friend to come and visit

Dear John,

I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and good spirits. As I moved to my new house, I am writing to invite you with family to this place, which is near to your city.

As you know, I was intrigued by diversified culture of Canada during my last year's visit to Toronto, which was the reason that made my mind to settle in this wonderful land. Consequently, I tried hard to secure permanent residency card for migrating and cleared all the tests required for migration; finally, I reached my dream land.

Moreover, I sold my property in India and bought a condominium in Ontario. As you stay nearby, I wish you to visit it with your spouse and kids. The building is located in city-center and city-life looks lively and vibrant here. Although the accommodation is expensive and difficult to find, I consider myself lucky to get spacious 3 room with kitchen apartment easily on time. Due to job transfer, the previous owner was in hurry to sell the condo, making my job easy to get it at reasonable cost.

Admittedly, the kids would be having spring holidays; so why don't you plan coming to my place this weekend. Unequivocally, we would have good time together with families.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Your affectionate friend,
xyz

Votes
Average: 7.6 (8 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, I hope this letter finds you in radiant ...
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Line 9, column 62, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...would be having spring holidays; so why dont you plan coming to my place this weeken...
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Line 13, column 26, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you soon. Your affectionate friend, xyz
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, if, look, moreover, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74553571429 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65438109523 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665178571429 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6553547628 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7692307692 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218564192264 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778913055318 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791867277209 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129400093904 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810088634978 0.0580467560999 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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