You have recently moved to a new flat. Unfortunately, you lost some money the other day and can not afford to pay next month's rent which is due. Write a letter to the landlord explaining the situation and that you will pay as soon as your parents send th

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to let you know that I lost my wallet this morning and hence I would not be able to pay the rent I am due for next month.

While commuting back from the gym this morning, I unfortunately lost my wallet in the train. By the time I realized, the train had already left the station and following that I made numerous unsuccessful attempts to retrieve my wallet and all the money it has. Due to this, I find it tough to pay the upcoming due by time and I request you to extend the deadline.

I promise you that I will make the payment by the next weekend, as my parents will be transferring some money by then. Also, the upstairs shower seems to be leaking and the water is entering the cabinets in the kitchen. Kindly send a plumber to fix this issue as soon as possible.

Once again, I sincerely apologize for the delay in payment of rent due. I hope you understand and extend my deadline.

Yours faithfully,
Jonathon

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, so, then, while, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38333333333 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48185389687 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572222222222 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3692287227 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257309027027 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913505483441 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774112423661 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152639356537 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464101957753 0.0580467560999 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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