You have recently ordered an item through the Internet, but are not happy with the purchase. Write to the company. In your letter:
- describe what you purchased,
- explain why you are not happy with the purchase,
- tell them what you would like them to do about the situation.
I am writing to clarify my frustrations with recent experience I had at your service.
I was surprised at what happened after I had purchased furniture for my house through internet. Before I bought this item, advertisements of furniture had been came very interesting.
It was written that prices of furniture were cheaper on this site than other sites. When I looked through another cite after I bought your furniture, I saw furniture on that cite which was the same as your one and price was lower than yours. Now I am a bit hesitant to believe your advertisement and the way you conduct business.
I want you to be aware of my dissatisfaction, so either I send back your item and take my money or prices of furniture should be lower as others.
I hope to hear back about this unfortunate incident as soon as possible at 994555982895 or via email at agil_001@live.ru
advertisements of furniture had been came very interesting.
advertisements of furniture had been coming very interesting.
prices of furniture were cheaper on this site than other sites.
prices of furniture were cheaper on this site than that on other sites.
prices of furniture should be lower as others.
prices of furniture should be lower than others.
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Attribute Value Ideal
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